Critical Hit

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Critical Hit

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I have a touch of a lyricist in me and have been working with some songs for a bit now. They're all with my hobby band called Entertainment System. We write songs about dorky stuff and video games. This is one of the first songs I wrote. It mixes growling metal with some actual singing before the screaming of "critical hit" is initiated. Wash, rinse repeat. We've been lazy with getting music put to it and plus I need to find a growler as my throat is far inferior to do it.

The song itself is a battle of good and evil, the evil being the growling parts and the good being the parts that are song wherein the good guy is rolling the dice.

So without further ado, please enjoy these lyrics.


Genre: Metal

Among the mountain sides
I roam
My lasting reign of terror
Will come

I take this sword into my hands
Speed off into those distant lands
These dice within my paaaalms
I~ rooooll~
CRITICAL HIT
CRITICAL HIT

Within my darkend lair
I plan
Among the jagged edged rocks
And sand

The evil spreads it's blackened wings
The bright and shiny metal sings
These dice within my paaaalms
I~ rooooll~
CRITICAL HIT
CRITICAL HIT

(Solo)
Slay the creature!
Save the party!
Roll a twenty!
Perform your check!
CRITICAL HIT

I retreat back into my
For-tress
The hero may have won but I
Wont quit

Within my soul I wield a power
Send evil back into it's tower
Out of my hands I make a mighty
Roooooll~
CRITICAL HIT
CRITICAL HIT
CRITICAL HIT
CRITICAL HIT

(Song end)

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