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Critique wanted - Vane Sunset (Dyne and Ghaleon)
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Critique wanted - Vane Sunset (Dyne and Ghaleon)
I speed painted this today. 6 hours is what it took in Photoshop CS. Please critique, I'm trying to push myself to achieve better things.
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Re: Critique wanted - Vane Sunset (Dyne and Ghaleon)
That's legit man! No real critique here. Just that I like it! ![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_smile.gif)
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Re: Critique wanted - Vane Sunset (Dyne and Ghaleon)
I'd totally buy that and hang it on my wall. Just sayin.
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Re: Critique wanted - Vane Sunset (Dyne and Ghaleon)
Don't worry, I added mountains and clouds so it's a TOTALLY different piece! ^^
I plan to make a few improvements based on some crits I've received, but it'll probably be a few days away. Busy busy.
I plan to make a few improvements based on some crits I've received, but it'll probably be a few days away. Busy busy.
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Re: Critique wanted - Vane Sunset (Dyne and Ghaleon)
Love the Four Heroes love. <3
The Blue Star looks like it's closer than the sky, though.
The Blue Star looks like it's closer than the sky, though.
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Re: Critique wanted - Vane Sunset (Dyne and Ghaleon)
Updated the piece based on some of the critiques I've received. New critiques and thoughts would be appreciated. ^_^
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Re: Critique wanted - Vane Sunset (Dyne and Ghaleon)
Holy cow Nobi, it's GORGEOUS... *__* <3
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Re: Critique wanted - Vane Sunset (Dyne and Ghaleon)
First error I noticed with this picture is that they're not making out, you'll need to fix that.
Second thing I noticed is the complete lack of lens flare. You're gonna need to put some lens flare in there, you can't call yourself a real artist without some lens flare.
Finally, the ground is TOO ROUND for me, like they're standing on a katamari or something, it seems too odd and doesn't feel like natural terrain.
Questions:
Where's the sun? Where's the light source? Why aren't they making out?
Second thing I noticed is the complete lack of lens flare. You're gonna need to put some lens flare in there, you can't call yourself a real artist without some lens flare.
Finally, the ground is TOO ROUND for me, like they're standing on a katamari or something, it seems too odd and doesn't feel like natural terrain.
Questions:
Where's the sun? Where's the light source? Why aren't they making out?
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Re: Critique wanted - Vane Sunset (Dyne and Ghaleon)
^ Seriously, why aren't they making out??
But otherwise, looking really great. ^_^ I kind of miss the 'wide open spaces' feel of the first version, but I think the elements interact better in the second.
But otherwise, looking really great. ^_^ I kind of miss the 'wide open spaces' feel of the first version, but I think the elements interact better in the second.
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