Ah, years of my yelling at you about unrealistic bodies have finally taken effect.
![Razz :P](./images/smilies/icon_razz.gif)
I continue to fail to understand why you put Vs on faces for noses, though.
I didn't see the first one as fat at all, just fairly normal for today's styles. I think the reason some people are seeing her that way is that the curve of the pants' waistline is a bit too rounded and deep, which may look like her belly is actually bulging over it. I'm also wondering if maybe her right foot is looking a bit too short at the toe...?
For the second, I think it's more that the heads are slightly big compared to their bodies than that they're short. That may be a stylistic decision, though. The girl's left foot looks a bit odd...I guess she's pointing her foot (a
lot) while wearing platform boots, but it's still a bit odd. There's also a lack of shadows anywhere except in the background; I notice it most with her hand and left leg. Her face reminds me a lot of Luna.
Is this the same manga you were working on a few years ago? I'm assuming so from the name, though I suppose there are fewer pendants involved now since it's lost its S.
![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)